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Post by Kaine Australis on Jan 1, 2021 5:22:04 GMT -8
- Leto Bes'tial Class Mega Star Destroyer -
Ship Class: Star Battleship Ship Role: Mobile Base Ship Length: 19,990 meters Agility (A): 1 Defensive (D): 4 Offensive (O): 5 Speed (S): 3 Special Gear: 1 Grav Projectors
Description:
Standard Equipment:
Mk4 Fire Control System Anti-ion Emission Tracer Animated Metal Sealant Inertial Compensators Main Sublight Drive Anti-Concussion Field Generators Military Deflector Shield Generator Repulsorlift Arrays Molecular Furnaces
Hangar and Maintenance Facilities 216 Small craft
Barracks, Armoury, Support Facilities Space for up to 22000 troops
Internal Defences:
ABC Scramblers Laser Cutters
Armaments :
Heavy laser cannon turrets (550) Turbolaser Batteries (500) Ion cannon Batteries (75) Tractor beam projectors (100) Gravity well projectors (10)Designed to be both the ultimate expression of Vegemite power, and a mobile base and headquarters for the faction, the vessel known during construction and colloquially by her crew as 'The Beasty' is a colossal battleship comparable to anything in the galaxy before or since. In its primary role as the headquarters of the Vegemite Enclave, not only is this massive vessel able to carry troops into battle, but also capable of acting as the main base and flagship of the Vegemite Navy. Massive hangar bays can hold the vessel's strike craft and ground forces, as well as docking smaller craft as necessary. Additionally, it contains production lines, repair facilities, manufacturing plants, army training grounds and even R&D labs. The vessel contains industries made up of the premier research labs and factories in the Enclave, possessing industrial capabilities rivaling the most productive worlds under Vegemite control. Though the vessel can produce small items and supplies, it is not a shipyard or fighter manufacturing facility, having to rely on regular shipyards to produce vessels for its fleet. Armored decks house departments reserved specifically for the conception, research, and approval of new weapons and technology. It also houses well-stocked raw materials reserves, durasteel foundries, an asteroid mining complex for harvesting raw materials directly from asteroid fields, as well as state-of-the-art production lines. Training centers exist throughout the vessel to prepare inductees and recruits for life in the Vegemite military. As it carries all the supply lines, it also could not be cut off from supply lines. Its capabilities are such that its destructive power is comparable to that of a full fleet, its production capabilities comparable to that of a planet, and can serve as a test-bed for the various military advances of the Vegemite Enclave. The main command bridge is like nothing the galaxy has ever seen outside of a luxurious playground on an exotic leisure world. Turbolift doors open on to a wide open deck, roofed over with a dome of transparent reinforced crystasteel, allowing for a panoramic view of space before the command ship. Lining the panoramic dome are holoprojectors and light fittings, including UV lamps, allowing for the dome to be covered with a vista of a pleasant tropical sunset in perpetuity; or for any other image the command Vegemites might desire. Sunken crew pits are tastefully concealed by tropical plants and even trees in soil beds that surround the raised pool deck. A swim up bar lines one side of the large pool. Adjacent to this area is the sunken hot tub and lounge, with its own well stocked bar. The entire vessel can be commanded from the pool or hot tub with ease. At the rear, above the turbolifts, reached via a small flight of switchback stairs is the command lounge, with couches, holodisplays, and other seating. Service personnel are on hand to take care of all the needs of command staff while aboard. Behind the bridge deck, the vessel also possesses a detention center near the stern, a commons area, an assembly hall which can accommodate up to 100,000 personnel, as well as hundreds of maintenance rooms. The majority of the crew quarters are located within the various central sections of the ship. The tips of the wings are reserved for top secret labs and dangerous weapons tests, and also contain secure communications hubs. To convey ship's personnel quickly throughout the massive ship, the central axis possesses a crew transportation causeway with an integrated tram system.
Armed with the finest weapons in the galaxy, batteries dot the colossal vessel's hull, giving her firepower to rival anything in her size class. In addition to massive energy weapon arrays, the vessel has a hundred powerful tractor beam arrays that can be deployed against enemies as well as to pull in asteroids and other debris for mining into resources for the Vegemite war machine. Ten huge gravity well projectors allow the vessel to interdict opposing vessels from traveling through hyperspace, making fleeing from this behemoth a challenge.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Jan 1, 2021 6:59:15 GMT -8
So a couple of things:
1. I would ask to make the image smaller.
2. I am not sure about approving a custom submission with a superweapon on it. Canon submissions would make sense cause they were built that way, but considering that superweapons can only be used in Closed RP and are banned otherwise, I am not sure about approving a custom submission with a superlaser attached to it.
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Post by Kaine Australis on Jan 1, 2021 7:39:54 GMT -8
Nicademus Delvardus IV No worries, ive resized the image and removed the superlaser. I can see how something like that isnt gonna fly in open Rp.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Jan 13, 2021 8:18:24 GMT -8
Just not sure if having shipyard facilities should be an extra point BUT honestly, I don't see it being used much beyond a few submissions.
So will give it an approval!
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Post by Kaine Australis on Jan 13, 2021 22:10:18 GMT -8
Nicademus Delvardus IV We can safely say it won't be producing capital ships. Maintaining large vessels and producing fighters sure.
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Post by Damocles Ordo [RETIRED] on Jan 13, 2021 22:31:33 GMT -8
given they're not standard equipment, seems odd not to label them special gear.
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Post by Luxeria on Jan 14, 2021 2:20:44 GMT -8
Agreed. Ships of this size typically never had such facilities. As such, it would require a point to have shipyard facilities, even if just for making repairs. Repairing fighters, no, but repairing maintaining capital ships, I would say so.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Jan 14, 2021 7:34:27 GMT -8
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Post by Standash Thul on Jan 14, 2021 10:24:33 GMT -8
I agree, the logistics of producing ships from another ship is very special. Being able to have them dock for repairs works. I could see a few large ships under the wings as repairs happen. I look at it that ship yards are very specialized things. Having a very capable warship also be a mobile ship yard doesn't totally line up for me.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Jan 14, 2021 10:29:12 GMT -8
Alright then, we should determine if it is 1 or 2 points then for these shipyards. Thoughts on which, Standash? Any further comments, Luxeria and Damocles Ordo [RETIRED]?
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Post by Damocles Ordo [RETIRED] on Jan 15, 2021 3:16:22 GMT -8
I'd wager 1 point is more than enough. It's not producing vessels and only repairing them, there's no real great advantage comparable to a full cloak system.
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Post by Luxeria on Jan 15, 2021 4:03:22 GMT -8
With that understanding, I would agree. If it’s only capable of repairing ships and not building them, then one point is enough.
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Post by Kaine Australis on Jan 16, 2021 6:15:40 GMT -8
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Post by Standash Thul on Jan 19, 2021 6:06:04 GMT -8
What can it build/ repair?
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Post by Kaine Australis on Jan 19, 2021 8:09:14 GMT -8
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Post by Standash Thul on Feb 19, 2021 14:03:48 GMT -8
I would still put a point if it can create ships. Repair wouldn't need it, but producing will need it.
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Post by Kaine Australis on Feb 20, 2021 11:26:20 GMT -8
Standash Thul I have removed all reference to the ship being able to produce fighters or ships, and have put in a line clarifying what it can and cant do.
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Post by Standash Thul on Feb 25, 2021 6:21:35 GMT -8
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Feb 25, 2021 8:58:59 GMT -8
Yes it still does!
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