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Post by Standash Thul on Oct 2, 2020 8:12:39 GMT -8
-TIE/Ni, Nissi-Class Interceptor- www.artstation.com/artwork/gJDlzZShip Class: Heavy Starfighter Ship Role: Interceptor Ship Length: 8 meters Agility (A): 4 Defensive (D): 3 Offensive (O): 2 Speed (S): 5 Special Gear:0 Description:-Seeing a need for a designated reliable and easy to use interceptor in the First Order Navy, engineers and designers at Rendili searched the archives for a solution. They found an old prototype fighter in the TIE/Ba Baron, working back they were able to produce a new mainline Interceptor. The twin ion engines were powered by two ion reactors with pre-charged deuterium power cells. The most expensive element was an advanced Torplex Flight Computer. The flight aids help good pilots perform like great pilots and allowed the fighter to be incredibly agile for its speed. The Fighter was designed for one purpose, to kill enemy fighters and win dogfights. As such the weapon systems were scaled back from the Baron prototype. The fighter's name came from an old language meaning Banner as these fighters moved so fast they left what looked like a streaking banner twisting behind them. Weapons 4 Heavy cannons
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Post by Luxeria on Oct 2, 2020 12:58:11 GMT -8
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Post by Standash Thul on Oct 2, 2020 13:54:56 GMT -8
That actually works, I will remove that number from the description. I was needing to put some separation between this and the Cannon Barron. This one will be faster doe to its lack of weapons.
If the computer is "near astromech" thats why i added it there. Very happy to work through it more. If that point is not needed, I would love to move it to defenses.
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Oct 2, 2020 14:47:23 GMT -8
Image definitely needs to be smaller and the hyperlink you posted should be below the image, not off to the side.
Also put two rrs in the word Baron when its supposed to be one.
I am not so sure about this 'near astromech' tech as it is something that's not canon. I am very hesitant about approving something like that.
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Post by Luxeria on Oct 2, 2020 15:14:06 GMT -8
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Oct 2, 2020 15:58:33 GMT -8
Ah! Well then, it really isn't a special gear. We have other FO canon TIEs and they don't label that as a special gear. It's part of the fabric of the model.
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Post by Standash Thul on Oct 2, 2020 17:16:49 GMT -8
The Baron had an experimental version of it according to wookie, that's what i was going with there.
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Post by Standash Thul on Oct 2, 2020 17:19:08 GMT -8
Is that picture size better
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Oct 2, 2020 17:24:54 GMT -8
Yes much better.
Its experimental, but still not really needed for a special gear I feel.
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Post by Standash Thul on Oct 2, 2020 21:09:35 GMT -8
Edited, moved it to defense
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Post by Nicademus Delvardus IV on Oct 5, 2020 16:04:08 GMT -8
Approved
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Post by Zion Morviael [RETIRED] on Oct 11, 2020 23:45:42 GMT -8
APPROVED.
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